Interim Presentation Review:

What worked well:

Presentation:

-        - Models

-        - Liked the idea of a video

-        - Interactive

-        - Straight to the point

Design:

-        - How it told a narrative

-        - Extending out to the main road

-        - The design is different to other towns iconic sculptures (2D aspect instead of 3D)

-        - The buoy idea

-        - Showing cool things in the town

What didn’t work well:

Presentation:

-        - Low quality video

-        - Models need improvement

-        - Too short

-        - Plan what everyone will say

-        - Design needs to speak for itself

Design:

-        - Research materials

-        - How it is made

-        - Refine the forms

-        - Incorporating driftwood?

Where to from here:

-        - Develop the design, story and where they would be positioned

-        - Research materials, cost and where they would be made

-        - Make a better slideshow/ video

-        - Develop the booklet (TEST PRINT!)

-        - Drawings, physical models, digital models and context shots

-        - Think about the detail and how it would be made

-        - More research into Himatangi?